Friction Between People

Hi everyone,

Still doing agent research. But I also added micro-tension to page 324.

I added the conflict that plagues my main character: be seen V’s hide/fade. Just a small reminder as there was other micro-tension on the page. 14 words.

The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins: page 324

On this page Katniss is assessing her enemy. The micro-tension comes from thoughts: threat or not a threat. Or possibly: what is the degree of the threat and the resulting (and very much linked), degree of worry.

Legendborn by Tracy Deonn: page 324

The micro-tension comes from Nick’s disapproval. Friction between people.

Okay, that’s it from me.

See you tomorrow,

Happy writing,

Joanne.

Micro-tension pages revised: 7

* If you want to learn more about micro-tension see Donald Maas’s, The Breakout Novelist: How to Craft Novels That Stand Out and Sell. Chapter 17.

He’s also given webinars on it which can be bought from the Free Expressions website I linked on my courses recommendations page. Here’s the link directly to the webinar recordings. https://www.free-expressions.com/webinar-recordings